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Here I come, my fetid souls
I have come to end your never ending nightmare
To shepherd you to the empty void
To sing you this lullaby
This is the song the reaper sings
Isn't it a cute little number
something random i came up with
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kitt0hokage Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
I like this one more that the other :3.
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
wich other one?
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kitt0hokage Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
the one i commented on before this one xD
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
oh ya
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Haboui Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The only little number,
that you needed as a reminder,
Was taken by the devils hand.

And with that number,
That precious precious number,
It was shattered to several pieces.

And only then did you realize,
You never needed it in the first place.

MAN, I never write unless i read your stuff, AND YOU SAY PEOPLE DON'T MISS YOU!!! :iconpillowfightplz: WE MISS YOU LIKE CRAZY!!!

Whoops, forgot to appologize about the random poem. I'll upload it cuz i haven't in a while
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
ok and thx u annd im glad i inspired you and trust me nobody did
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Haboui Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well that's why there are so many opions in the world ;p
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Student Writer
so many wat
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Haboui Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Each person has a different view in the world. And yours is one and others is the well, other's. ;p
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
k, coolio
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Let the reaper sing his song,
we'll create the passion based upon
his right to change,
and in the end-
we'll all win. ~Savvy

Your words inspired that ^^^^...sorry, just felt I should add that as a response. Hope you don't mind
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Writer
nope i like hearing others people stuff and thx you for commenten and were you been
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
that's cool. you're welcome lol. and I've just been busy with school, hanging out with a friend of mine during the weekends mainly. What about you? how was your break?
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Writer
good, although comen back suked
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
sounds like it. sorry to hear that, sir.
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Writer
it ok, i deserve it
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no you don't. don't put yourself down like that. you're awesome and I don't see why more people haven't seen that. you're poetry is moving and amazing! honestly! :) <3
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Student Writer
i wish the poeple i cared about thought that way
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