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Am i not good enough for you?
What can i do to make me good enough
How deep must i cut tell i'm good enough
Who must i kill to be good enough
Why i'm i never good enough
Someone please take this knife and plunge it into my flesh over and over and over again
Carve me up tell someone will find me attractive
Cut me tell my blood drowns the world
Look at all the pretty red drops that fall from the sky
Look closely and you'll see all the faces of all the people who self harm inj the droplets
See the droplets feed the earth and grow the all the plants
Look, our pain, does help
People keep telling me i'm not good enough so....... whatever
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AmbreeChristineSkye Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
Those people can just stick their not good enough up their...
Anyway lovely poem. keep your chin up.
please keep on writing. =)
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thx you for sayn that
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imamnobody Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i feel your pain in this one im sorry you felt like that i hope it gets better, and if you need to talk to anyone im all ears for you
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
thx and im sry you did
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imamnobody Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
its ok thanks for caring
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
yw, im here to serve
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
Wow, this reminds me so much on one of my characters. They would literally do anything for that person. Even die. Even kill.

Lovely piece! Wonderful work!

And I don't agree, you are good enough. At least to me.
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Writer
thx you and im glad you liked it
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LuminescentBrown Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Writer
I don't quite agree with your concept
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Writer
huh?
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