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I am scard
Both mentally and physically
There are scars all over my body
They are deep and speak of times much worse than these
Each one for a broken hear, a shattered friendship, a forgotten promise
These wounds within my mind
They tear me apart
The bleed and pulse with pain just as much as they day they were wrought upon me
The flower of those i love has now rotted away
Only the petals remain and the float all around me
But i can not touch them
Their they go, blown away in the subtle breeze
Hear me scream
See me burn
Never shall i allow someone to be as beaten and rejected as me
If you feel pain as i do
If you bleed as i do
If you love as i do
If you have been rejected as i have been
Talk to me
I shall help
Even if i must give my life
I must help
I will help
one of my friends wants to commit suicide and i don't know what to do, this keeps happening to me so though i might as well write something related to it, i don't know how it is though so, enjoy
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Strange-Owl Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thats so pretty
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Writer
bleh
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I hope everything goes okay with your friend! I wish you the best of luck my dear friend <3 I love your poem. I'm glad you're willing to help others with the same thoughts as you. It speaks for your character.
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Student Writer
thx and rly?
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) Yes yes <3
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Student Writer
yays
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savvycoon Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student Writer
lools
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CharlieRoz Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really like how you wrote and interpreted this. I hope your friend turns out okay
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Student Writer
thx you and me to
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