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They say tell death do we part
But if we love this much, are we not already dead
For if we love so much
We have no room for nothing else
Just as death leaves no room for happiness, for sadness, for anything
All that is left is the empty void from beyond
Death and the heart go hand in hand down a dirty cobbled road street that is your life
One exist on the path
On exist off
Yet the still walk hand in hand
You may ask why they do this
They have the same destination
The end of your life
The end of your rational thought
The fear of loss
The fear of the ending
All these things they have in common
This is why death holds your heart in the palm of his skeleton hands
When he crushes it see it scatter into a million dancing flower petals floating in the air
Know that your life is done
Goodbye
But if we love this much, are we not already dead
For if we love so much
We have no room for nothing else
Just as death leaves no room for happiness, for sadness, for anything
All that is left is the empty void from beyond
Death and the heart go hand in hand down a dirty cobbled road street that is your life
One exist on the path
On exist off
Yet the still walk hand in hand
You may ask why they do this
They have the same destination
The end of your life
The end of your rational thought
The fear of loss
The fear of the ending
All these things they have in common
This is why death holds your heart in the palm of his skeleton hands
When he crushes it see it scatter into a million dancing flower petals floating in the air
Know that your life is done
Goodbye
Literature
I Survived Suicide
Talking to him on the phone I heard him cry
A silent tear slips down my cheek
I can't feel this for him... no matter how much I love him
Why am I doing this???
I take the knife and slice up my wrists
A call comes in
I reach for the phone
One last word with the man I love.
He begs me to stop
He says he'll never leave
He reminds me of the good times
And what we could be
The kids we'll have
The life we'll leave
I struggle to stand
And stop the blood
I let out a cry as the pain sears through me
As I fight for conciousness
As I fight for life
Now four months later
I look at the scars
The darkest ones the run up my arms
He lie
Literature
Forever Goodnight
Please whisper to me
And hold me close tonight
Don't leave me all alone.
Not with this empty bed
I only desire affection
And cherished love
Even if I'm your porcelain doll
At least you will give me attention
While I lie awake at night
I can only think of it all
The love we made
Even the lingering laughter
The growing of our love
Only to have you being taken
Forced away by responsibility
Even your brain turns against me
Please only whisper to me
Touch me all over
Say my name repeatedly
Make me forget the world
Simply love me.
Literature
Already Dead
I wish I would OD.
I'd love to drown in the darkness.
To never come back would be a gift.
I wish I would drown.
I'd love to fall into the despairing pit.
To never be able to be fished out.
I wish I would fall off a cliff.
I'd love to see ground hurtling toward me.
To know everything will break without a scream.
I'd love to make the bullet hurtle through my brain.
I'd love to pull the trigger near my skull.
To feel nothing and to leave my blood stains as a reminder.
I would be dead before the pills fully circulated in my blood.
I would be dead before the water filled my lungs.
I would be dead before I hit the ground.
I would be
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this was a request and i know it doesn't flow very well and that it jumps around a lot so don't even mention it
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I really like it. It's pensive, pervasive, and moving.
Only two things distracted me: first, it's "till death do we part," and second, the misspelling of the word "void" in the sixth line. No big deal, just typos.
So yeah! Good job, I like it.
Only two things distracted me: first, it's "till death do we part," and second, the misspelling of the word "void" in the sixth line. No big deal, just typos.
So yeah! Good job, I like it.