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Pain sears across my back, splitting me in two, both screaming, both laughing
"SOMETHING IS GROWING, SOMETHING IS HURTING" one screams, raking his nails across my shoulders, leaving bloody furrows across my skin
"yes, something wonderful, something that lives" the other cried in elation,tentatively reaching he hands behind his head, reaching for the new flesh, caressing it gently
" CUT IT OFF, IT HURST SO BAD" one screeched, his nails growing into claws, canines lengthening into wicked fangs
"no, let it grow, let it thrive" the other cooed, his skin glowing a ghostly pale and his eyes turning into burning white stars
" I WANT IT GONE, I WONT IT OUT OF ME" one bellowed, his voice deepening, his skin fading  into ever blacker night
"i want it to flourish, i want it to evolve" the other murmured, his voice becoming harder and harder to hear, fading in and out
"WhAt Is HaPpEnImG, WhY DoEs It hUrT? WhAt Is GrOwInG oN mE?" i screach, the two voices melding into one again, then splitting violently, ripping the growing flesh from its cocoon of dead skin, forcing it into existence
Wings a black sheath, gilded in glittering points of lights caress my skin, folding over me, hiding me from the pain
"REMOVE THEM, THEY ARE NOT US!" one shouts, the wings thrashing in response, feathers ripping free and spinning into the ether
"no, let us use them to fly, to escape" the other whispered softly, reaching out a loving hand and stroking the glossy feathers, leaving more shards of stars in its trailing wake
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i have no idea what this is or how to end it so... neh
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:iconwindygirl18:
It is confusing but it still has such great detail good job
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~thegreatpoetnick119 Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
im glad you liked it and thanks
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:iconwindygirl18:
Hello my friend sry I've been gone
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~thegreatpoetnick119 Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
its alright, not your fualt
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Mood: Love ~Sabehlra Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, just wow. The polar personalities reacting to growing wings is ssooooo vivid. Nuh, but I could almost see it/them in my mind, writhing in pain and joy. ..... Perhaps I can use this for a part of 1 of my stories?
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~thegreatpoetnick119 Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
if you make sure to give me credit for them, id be honored if you did
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~Sabehlra Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh, yes, I would. :XD:
*muses to self*
Now, to think. How do I incorporate this into 1 of my stories? Or should I just make up a new 1?
If I decide to make a new story, I'd love any info you'd like to share, like names. X)
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~thegreatpoetnick119 Nov 27, 2012  Student Writer
id love to
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Mood: Love ~ghostwritergmk Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!!!
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~thegreatpoetnick119 Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
im glad you do
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