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I press up against you
I nibble on your ear
I lift you of the bed
I make you hold me in your arms
You protect me like no other
You love me like nobody else can
You care when nobody else does
Who knew this could all happen between to boys
yes im bi
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:iconallflowerspetalsfall:
AllFlowersPetalsFall Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
This is really sweet, i can picture a lil romantic scene with this, nice job!
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Writer
thx and nice
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:iconjackietakanori:
JackieTakanori Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
i am too ;3 nicee makes me feel normal
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Student Writer
nice
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:iconwolflaf:
WolfLAF Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
:heart:
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Student Writer
i know right
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:iconwolflaf:
WolfLAF Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
mhm ^^
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:iconcutternamedshay:
CutterNamedShay Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
That's Kay I'm kinda too.
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student Writer
yays, we hav somtin in common
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:iconcutternamedshay:
CutterNamedShay Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Lol jes .-.
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:iconsavvycoon:
savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awww! It's so sweet! I love it!
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Student Writer
thx you, im glad you do
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:iconsavvycoon:
savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^^ very welcome. I plan to check out even more of your gallery, sir! ^^
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Student Writer
thatd be apreciated
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:iconsavvycoon:
savvycoon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^^ will do
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:iconibinked:
IBinked Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG i love yaoi!!! <3 <3 *fangirl moment* :woohoo:
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student Writer
i know right
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:iconibinked:
IBinked Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D :D its amazing.
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student Writer
thx
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:iconibinked:
IBinked Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome <3
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:iconcheesecracka:
cheesecracka Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011
I approve. :iconiapproveplz:
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Student Writer
thx, i apreciate it
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:iconhunterofbranmuffins:
HunterOfBranMuffins Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
Aww...~
And it still works with girls. :D

It's short, but I love it. It's adorable. :love:
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Student Writer
i know right
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:iconalice845:
Alice845 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i <3 this its soo deep!! i tsooo romantic!! <3<3
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Student Writer
thx
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:iconalice845:
Alice845 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ur welcomez
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:iconlazycookies:
lazycookies Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awww fluffy and sweet~ <3
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
thx
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:iconlazycookies:
lazycookies Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :3
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:iconzozanna:
zozanna Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yummeh yaoi :D
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
i know right
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:iconzozanna:
zozanna Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its like an addiction for me xD
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
same here
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:iconfujihara:
Fujihara Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
Squee~ ouo
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
huh?
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:iconstrangeness13:
strangeness13 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011
i like it (woo me again lolz)
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Student Writer
oh i will
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:iconhollybloccato:
Hollybloccato Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011   Writer
Its beautiful!!! :D
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Student Writer
thx you
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:iconhollybloccato:
Hollybloccato Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011   Writer
your welcome :)
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fushigi-no-kuni-oujo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Mmmmmmmmmm, yaoi~~~~~~~~ :iconiloveitplz:
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Student Writer
i know right
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:iconstar-bunny-honeybee:
star-bunny-honeybee Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
cool :D
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KlaxonLithology Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like this poem could use some refining, but otherwise it's fine - simple and sweet.
Also, the last stanza should be:

Who knew this could all happen between two boys.
Don't forget the period at the end.
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zombiekat69 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
Haha how did you know I liked Yaoi ;3
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:iconthegreatpoetnick119:
thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Student Writer
i guessed
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:iconzombiekat69:
zombiekat69 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
^_^
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ENwings Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Sorry to put two comments, but, I did want to say the title of this one makes it seem stereo typical. If that makes any sense. It just gave expectations, when infact your poem runs much deeper than what I thought, because when I see the word Yaoi I think of gay porn. :P And your poem is beautiful. Just throwing that out there, hope you don't take any offense.
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thegreatpoetnick119 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Student Writer
i dont
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